Ahmed of the Fantastic Fours

One mysterious day me and my sisters were playing on the field when we saw gigantic spooky footprints .We stopped and looked at them .No matter how hard we tried we couldn’t guess [predict] what it was .It could’ve actually been a hole but why is it there? I was a bit scared and worried but also amazed .I hope I don’t see it at any time .Is it good or bad? Well I hope the creature doesn’t eat me .I wouldn’t like the idea of it … BE AWARE!

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Year 4 TA and Sporting King
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One Response to Ahmed of the Fantastic Fours

  1. Mrs Slack says:

    Ahmed, you have used apostrophes for contraction accurately. Your use of questions engages the reader in the puzzle. In your next writing, try to use a comma after a fronted adverbial phrase.

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