Amirah of the Fantastic Fours

One  lovely , sunny day me and my friend was playing a wonderful game of time bomb but the ball flew away .So I went to get it I was confused so I ran. I saw two giant footsteps was it a joke? A big foot I don’t have a clue a minutes later I told my friend she same as me had no clue what it was or who did it .Will we ever see it , will it come back who knows if you have any bit of help you can tell me I need it so bad!

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Year 4 TA and Sporting King
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One Response to Amirah of the Fantastic Fours

  1. Mrs Slack says:

    You used a super opener for your writing. You used questioning to build up suspense. When you use questions in your next writing, remember to check you have used a question mark.

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