Musa

It was a Friday night I was in my bed when I heard a loud massively loud thump I was extremely scared and then I looked out of my window to see two huge foot prints and then I had my chance see the creature that made those foot prints but then the mysterious came up to me and took me to his underground lair it was wondrous it had gold,

Diamonds and silver I wonder where he got them.

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Year 4 TA and Sporting King
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One Response to Musa

  1. Mrs Slack says:

    Well done Musa, you developed your own idea. Your vocabulary choices make your writing gripping for the reader. To make your writing even better, remember to check if you need commas or full stops.

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